(Original Black Skylark artwork copyright owned by Denise Elliot Vernon)


Have you heard the song of the black skylark?
That creature of burning black leaves

found often at midnight on top the gleaming sphere

of Savannah’s city hall.

Or sometimes just outside the windows

of those about to die or those being born.



People tell tales, and tales

adorn themselves with legend.

There is one story about a waitress,

she was somebody’s mama and daughter,

about 20 or 30, half Muslim, half Jewish,

on her way home walking down Bay street

around 3 a.m. when a manbeast strolled

out of an alley and struck her to the ground.


His thick hands had already torn through

her blouse, and pointed teeth like razors

sliced her skirt and muscular thighs.

A naked rage jutted from his crotch

and dripped hot ignorance all over

the woman’s exposed flesh. Just above

the street where they struggled, there in the window

of a second-floor apartment was another

man and woman watching the manbeast

rattle fury all over the screaming waitress.

They watched until overtaken by a heat
that slammed them banging against the windowsill.



And that was when the sound came.


It curved like a screeching arrow

arching up out of the river behind city hall

but at the same time that sound fell,

like a smoking moon shouting out prophecies,

it rolled down the street like a hurricane of jazz singers

and exploded out the sky like a god of love

outraged by the shadow of his own apathy.

The street shook and the manbeast emptied like a pig.

In the middle of their kiss, the couple in the window

erupted nausea from one mouth to the other.



The song of the black skylark blossomed

into a tidal wave of molten earth

that swallowed the manbeast whole

and flooded the window of the blissless couple

like a huge shroud of death stink with horror.

When silence descended over the street

the waitress lay on her back thinking she was dead.

Then slowly her eyes opened. She claimed later

that a large black bird, something other

than crow or a raven, was standing on top

of a man’s skull. One arm of the skeleton

pointed up as if in recognition of a vision.

This bird, she said, suddenly flared like a heaven

then shrunk into a silhouette against the full moon.



From that impossible distance she could hear the bird

until the flow of its roar pulled her to her feet

and she looked up again, this time to see two more

skeletons fallen against a window in an apartment

above the street. Like anybody would have done,

she began to run. As she went past city hall

the bird landed on its dome and began singing.



Many people said they both heard and saw it

just as the sun was rising. And the rain that fell

from a clear sky that morning, they all claimed, were the tears

of the sun, and that bird, weeping for the dead.



by Aberjhani


from Visions of a Skylark Dressed in Black

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Wow..Intense! Shocking in places, but in a good way. The whole passage about the waitress...I could feel the violation. Good writing! You really made me feel the emotion! "A naked rage jutted from his crotch and dripped hot ignorance all over the woman’s exposed flesh." I actually gasped when I read this! Powerful stuff! Great job, Aberjhahni.

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