Across A Vibrant Sating Sky ღ by Poetry Authoress Victoria L. McColley

[Poetic Literature by Victoria]

 

Across A Vibrant Sating Sky
by Romantic Authoress & The Muses by: Victoria L. McColley
Sunday, January 30, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.

birthing into this beauteous moment:

Across A Vibrant Sating Sky It was god’s finest sculptress, as the morning dew collected her jewels; Reflecting underneath the arriving warmth burnishing as an elysian sun dance… Painting the infinity of daybreak with consciousness, she poured her archways across the heavens; Beckoning the inceptions of celestial infancies; Birthing herself into the dawning twilight with surrender… Offering the creation of beatitude to whisper in bird songs, she reached with purpose awakening the zephyrs kiss; Showering the gardens of her radiance onto meadows; Delivering her canvas with fragrant perfumes… Emitting over the luminescence of her Olympian gateway, she arrives captured within the quietude of omniscient brilliance; Consummating the earth with her glorious forge; Dancing with cerulean hues across a vibrant sating sky… Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley 2011

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Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather	1/30/2011
this write moves and dances in dazzling color. like a passionate song. Excellent. Morgan
Reviewed by John Flanagan	1/30/2011
You don't just observe, Vickie, you see within; "...poured her archways across the heavens" is more than good, it's a delight and it has the passion of 'big picture' and that's just one of many exceptional phrases in this first-rate piece. From very rainy and greysky Singapore John
Reviewed by Christine Tsen	1/30/2011
Utterly gorgeous, full of vitality and meaning! Ever, Christine
Reviewed by TONY NERONE	1/30/2011
This piece was very Lovely, Vickie. Peace and Love Tony
Reviewed by Christine Alwin	1/30/2011
What a performance...brilliant, in color too! Love, Christine
Reviewed by Gene Williamson	1/30/2011
Victoria! I lose myself in the beauty of this moment. And that last line... Dancing with cerulean hues across a vibrant sating sky. Yes. -gene.
Reviewed by Diana Wiles	1/30/2011
Such an absolute treat for the senses... Hugs, Diana...
Reviewed by David cox	1/30/2011
what a wonderull piece of prose and the background track makes it come to life, it brings a glow of warmt to my heart from all this cold, cold weather we are having. oh and hey when are we going o your golden voice reciting some of your work again. dave
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson	1/30/2011
Beautiful piece so serne, loved the forest sounds embedded...well done Allen
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone	1/30/2011
Such serenity and beauty in this piece, Vickie..I feel your beautiful soul whispering through your words. Lovely as always, Peace, love and light, Amber