Have we had our last goodbye?
I can’t remember that...

Did you say, bye-bye baby... I’m going away?
Nope no re-collection whatso’ever

Maybe I was asleep…when you said those words…

Goodbye.

Entwined inside my own mind…dreams
Believing it was all good
That YOU was by my side.

How could I have been so blind?
Our days of love were like the sun…
When it rises to kiss the sky
Where the horizon meets, right in the middle
And the sun radiates warmth…

I sigh...

Now my days are nights…entwined
I don’t know right from wrong
Only that…our love is gone!

I lay here
Mind reeling
Sun sets…beautifully

I imagine…the night skies

I am the stars and you’re my moon
As we glide threw the galaxies

But I noticed…

Your moon…

Changes

From full, to half, to quarter…

Almost disappearing...

That’s how it is in reality
Your hear, but not completely
You are wrapped up
Entwined…like tapestry
In my mind, heart and soul…

Some days it's as if you are right by my side
Other days your only half in my way
While others you fade...”almost” going away
But just like the moon...

You never completely fade.

You are my moon entwined in tapestry
The tapestry of my mind…dreams

...There... will never be a goodbye
It just won’t exist
Not for YOU…"Not in my mind"

YOU, are in my world…my galaxy of love.

So as people sing sonnets to the moon
And sad songs to the stars
Tonight…

I will sing a sad melody from the heart.

“Those words…from me you will never hear
A* goodbye*…I cry and cry
To me you are my sunlight
As it rises to kiss the sky
So for now its only good…goodnight”

That is my sad melody
The one you left inside me…entwined.
The one that entwined in my veins...
The day I opened my eyes and saw that...

YOU went away.


J.Cruz©2010
A.k.a.VelvetRosetta


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Comment by Patti Rayfield on February 9, 2012 at 5:18pm

Really lovely and very tender...

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